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26 SepI would agree that a meeting with him is in order

kate
January 30, 2009 at 5:04 pm

Hmm, though I have absolutely no experience at all in this, my first thought as well was that he could have some sort of learning disability. I would agree that a meeting with him is in order– there’s obviously so much wrong here that it’s hard to know where to even begin on this paper. It might be revealing to ask his opinion of what he wrote, how he experiences the act of writing (not in those words, perhaps) and his past experiences of writing and what others have said to him about it. It’s true that the work obviously is not up to the standards of the class, but the fact that he turned something in when other classmates did not (and that he participates in class) means that he might be open to guidance (even if that guidance involves a lot of personal tutoring at the writing center or elsewhere.)

I also wondered if he might have written the paper under the influence of, well, substances, but since you say that in class he is often hard to understand as well, that seems less likely.

In any case, I still think he deserves to be explicitly told what an acceptable paper would look like and why his is not it– at least an overview, and then you could refer him to (or suggest that he find) someone who can work intensively with him on it, if he wants to pass the class.

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Auntie
January 28, 2009 at 7:30 pm

Shouldn’t it read “Mayor Antonio Villaraigosa said the city and county have hotlines available TO people in desperate straights…”?

First the man shoveling and now all this “strait” talk. You’re killing me here!

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25 SepThe answer to your question is that, like so many other grammar rules

mrschili
May 11, 2007 at 7:00 am

The answer to your question is that, like so many other grammar “rules,” the serial comma convention has been opened up to personal preference. It is completely correct to put the comma before the final ‘and’ in a series, and it is completely correct to leave it out except, as you noted, if the final item contains an ‘and,’ for example;

My youngest daughter only eats chicken nuggets, Granny Smith apples, graham crackers, and macaroni and cheese.

My opinion (and it is ONLY my opinion, not hard-and-fast rule) is that the comma goes before the final ‘and’ in a series, and that’s what I teach, but I don’t mark students’ papers wrong if they leave it out. I’m not aware that it’s always that way in composition, but it’s always been that way in MY classroom. I think it’s funny that there’s a sort of blood feud between AP and composition on this. Funny how worked up we all get about grammar conventions.

Finally, I don’t know if your typeset answer for the omission of the comma is correct, but it certainly SOUNDS plausable. I kind of like it, actually….

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Jangari
May 10, 2007 at 11:36 pm

Well, many in Chomskyland – the magical land where reality takes a holiday – dismiss Everett’s work entirely. The story is long and complicated.

But I don’t think linguistic relativity is all that strong, Whorf’s take on it was too strong, but linguists that accept relativity don’t go as far as he does anymore. The way Pinker characterises relativity is unfortunate, there’s a hell of a lot of middle ground on the issue, yet he remains adamant that it means that ‘culture is entirely determined by language’ which is clearly too strong, and false. A more sophisticated way to talk about it is ‘language and culture, while largely independent, influence each other somewhat’.

As for language affecting cognition, well, I don’t think that’s so unreasonable. There’s a language in PNG, I think it’s Oksapmin, also called Oksap, that has grammatical evidentiality – everything you say must obligatorily include a marker that denotes how you know this. I forget how many markers there are, less than 15, I think. They go on the end of a verb in a sentence like There’s a pig in the bush and they mark things like direct perception I saw it , indirect perception I heard but did not see it , indirect evidence I saw its footprints and deduce it is there somewhere , second-hand knowledge somebody saw it and told me and so on. Apologies to RL if I completely misrepresented your research! That was all off the top of my head from a talk at a conference last year.

The contention is this: when an Oksapmin speaker says that something is the case, they have to attend to the reason they have for knowing it to be the case, and this is due to the constraints on the grammar. Then, take it a step further: when an Oksapmin speaker speaks a different language, one without grammatical evidentiality, do they still attend to those reasons? What about when they think something, do they think about how they know something?
If the answer is yes, then there’s a strong case to conclude that the grammatical constraints of Oksapmin, namely, evidentiality, affect the cognitive processes of the speaker.

Mrs Chili, …and you do know, don’t you, that you’re a geek? Maybe even a bigger one than I?

I’m slowly but surely arriving at that conclusion. Thanks for hastening the process. Oh, and I dig that you use the word dig .

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20 SepI managed to get them both aside before they left class today

Grammar Snob
January 10, 2007 at 8:51 pm

Hooray! The first day must be so nerve racking!

Congrats!

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Well, What Do You Know!.
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It seems that my roster for Monday’s composition class includes a couple of gentlemen I’ve had the pleasure of having in class before! These young men were – how shall I put it? – challenging elements of my public speaking class and, if my first impressions of today are in any way accurate, are bent on being so again this term. Well, I suppose one must stick to one’s strengths.

I managed to get them both aside before they left class today to point out to them that our history gives me pause. I will send each a private email reiterating the expectations of the class and outlining the standards of behavior, though I wonder whether one or both of them will drop the class before we meet again on the 22nd.

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Kizz
January 6, 2007 at 10:32 am

Students in practical courses should write reviews! I can’t believe I didn’t think of this before. Write a review of a meal or a piece of art of a movie or something. If people are going to review what you do you should know what it looks like from the other side.

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Rick
December 19, 2006 at 3:18 pm

Yay!!!! [he runs out the school door and jumps into a snow pile in the parking lot, only to learn that it hasn't snowed yet this year....]

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15 SepThe fact that this is NOT a HS job doesn’t really stop me short

Mrs.Chili
September 18, 2006 at 4:19 pm

I think I get where the “YOUR job” comment came from: my training is in HS teaching and, to this point, I’ve looked for HS jobs. The fact that this is NOT a HS job doesn’t really stop me short, though; I see it as more of a broadening.

It’s funny, too; my husband, all through my graduate school and internship, really encouraged me to aim for college-level teaching – he even mentioned applying SPECIFICALLY to TCC – because he thinks my personality is better suited to teaching adults. (That, and he worries greatly about the politics and general bullshit that goes around in high schools – we know a lot of HS teachers who do endless griping about the political climate and he knows full well that I’ve NO patience for it and will likely get myself in trouble in short order if put in the wrong situation). He stopped short of encouraging me to go for my PhD, though, even though I have to admit to considering aiming for it sometime in the not-too-distant future. I think grad school is a lot like labor – it takes a while to get over the pain of it, but once you do, you’re willing to do it again. Selective anmnesia is a wonderful thing.

Anyway, the deal is that I broadened the cast of my net by applying to community colleges and, lo and behold!, I caught something. I’m looking at it as a fantastic opportunity and maybe, just maybe, the Universe telling me that THIS is where I really belong.

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05 SepWe usually go to the movies on Sunday afternoons

Jangari
July 25, 2007 at 11:39 pm

The ‘usually’ examples depend a little more on adverb placement than you suggest here; I think it’s more than ‘flavo(u)r’.

We usually go to the movies on Sunday afternoons.

We go to the movies, usually on Sunday afternoons.

We go to the movies on Sunday afternoons, usually .

I’d contend that the first means that, for most Sunday afternoons, we are at the movies a film. The second though, suggests that if we are at a film, then chances are it is a Sunday afternoon. The third, and indeed the same with the adverb moved right to the front, can mean either and depend therefore on either context or intonation, as in John’s only example.

Hmm, after thinking about this a bit more, I agree entirely with John. These examples mean what they mean to me because of the intonation they have when I sound them out. Indeed I can override any interpretation simply by altering the prosody:

We usually go to the movies on Sunday afternoons.

Intonation is a lot more important than we give it credit for, methinks.

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Organic Mama
July 27, 2007 at 9:40 am

Thank you again, my friend, for stepping in, and so deftly. I am sorry to have missed this exercise; it sounds like a wonderful conversation and I thank you fro bringing the class to a place where we can continue to work with the description foundation you’ve help to build. Anytime you want to visit our little workshop, please do!

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